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Quality of animation isn't everything...

There was no humor, no plot, nothing to make you think, and no way to relate. This was pretty aweful. I suggest you actually make some appeal to audiance through story or innovation before you try again.

Did he ever get that drink?

:( ...poor guy. I enjoyed it except for the annoying and high pitched sword sounds, the bad up close characters. Also snow is a pretty lame guy. "I've trained this long for the sword, but you beat me in a duel. So instead of letting you have the sword to kill yourself with it, I'm going to join you on your quest." Whaaa? If I was snow and I gave a damn about the sword, I would backstab him the first chance I got, take the swords, and be done with it.

In other words, he's a very flat character. It's okay for a kid like Korah to be flat and naive character because he's a boy and he's the main character which allows the story to be explained when he learns about it, but not Snow. Snow needs to get in touch with reality, his struggle, his morals, his character, and his surroundings pretty damn quick or this series will die. Make his past apparent in his day to day life (without drawn out flashbacks and memories that drown the drive of a plot).

Why is it you think...

that God serves man? How utterly blasphomous can you possibly get? If anything doesn't make sense to me about christians right now, it's that. It's that most of mankind thinks they are the last evolution has to offer, that they rule over things that God created (and disrespects them), and believe, truly believe, that they need to be apart from nature (the wonderful thing that God created) to be pure. As well as control nature (the thing that sustains us) to survive and reach "paridise on Earth".

You have some great colors, good music, and fairly good animation. It was creative and simple. I just plainly don't agree with your bit about him creating a house for the man.

List of glitches (as much as I could find):

-Can't access hats while playing as the white guy
-Sometimes it freezes in random fights (likely it's just lag)
-In the car/minigun "level" the quality automatically turns to low
-Achievements that were there before disapeer (ignore poor spelling please)
-When you're playing as the yellow guy and you exit to menu or close out of the game, then later hit continue it turns you into the white guy
-On elevator, the yellow guy only starts fighting when the first big guy lands

Those are the only ones I could find that I consider "glitches". The gameplay in certain ways definately needs revision, but you've heard all about that haven't you? Overall it's a decent game with it's flaws and would be a great game without them.

Apology accepted...

Well I'm going to cry now...

Oh man that face...

is disgusting. Pretty decent music and background, but you're putting details that are one not needed and two the choice in proportions just does not work. At step 4 you were good, at step five you beat her face in with a garbage lid and filled it with waste. Then you added the spinecrawling eyebrows, a huge neck (a man's neck), and she looks like one of those people at diners that you know have seen a rough ass time in their life. She looks like some trashy excuse for a life that gets by on very little as she watches reruns and talk shows as she sits down to eat her ice cream straight from the container.

My advice: with flash, convey realism, don't try to make it so. Flash is meant for clean lines and you're overdoing realism. It's like if you draw someone with pencil and paper and you include EVERYTHING it makes them look old and ugly. That is precisely what you've done here. You've goen too far and make me want to puke. Go from step for and include one shade of shadow or many consecutive layers CREATIVELY placed. Not how they are in real life, but how you want to CONVEY realism. The only flaw you have is you have realistic shading without realistic proportions OR colors. And of course it's too detailed, in all the wrong ways.